theres no need to be a fuck about where someones going to/has applied to college.
there are people here who could just easily make fun of you for applying to nc state (or even unc).
but they dont, because they are smart enough to realize that their intelligence (or, rather, strength of transcript) doesnt give them that right.
btw, congrats dude on getting in to WV and App. State, and good luck with ISU. My high school writing program and college choices are very different than yours, so I'm not really sure I really could (efficiently) help you improve your essay. i can tell you though that this is an improvement, as you start to explore more "why" (class sizes, etc) isntead of "i am a good applicant and you are a good school." and id cut the last sentence.