im Fvcked in the head peom

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SuperDuck_1

Veteran XX
no one to talk to
the pain over whelms
it trickles down
im alone
no one calling on the phone
my msn list is empty
the blood slides down my arm
im alone
im hurt
no ones there
no ringing of the phone
im alone
no ones there
i bleed tonight
i bleed alone
just me
and my crimson tears
i bleed alone
no one to hug me
no one to care
the pain is there
it consumes me
i bleed alone
im hurt
i bleed alone
i want a hug
i bleed alone
no ones there
so i bleed alone
why live
when im alone
so i bleed
bleed
bleed
alone
oh god alone
am i
I
me
I bleed
alone
just me
all
all
all
alone
and my crimson tears
dripping alone
no one to help
no one to fix this
no ones there
so
so
so i bleed alone
i want a hug
i want someone to talk too
no ones there
so
so
so i bleed alone
these crimson tears is all i have
is all that will comfort me
so hopefully these crimson tears are enough to take all the hurt and pain away
flow oh God flow
oH god flow my percious crimson tears
let them take the hurt
let them take the pain
let them take all the tourment away from my grey pain filled soul
Oh god let them take there course
God let them do there worst
for i was here
and hopefully soon
i will be gone
and nothing left to morn
but my crimson tears
the crimson tears i left behind
to show you wants mine
and now nothings
its all i left behind
 
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Yes, it's true. But legitimately, the only way to feel better about a depressed life situation is to take a step back to an objective standpoint and try to figure out what exactly is wrong with your life that is making you so unhappy. Depression is seen by many as a disease of the mind that has to be cured with drugs, however I see it as a state of being that can be used to diagnose a problem with one's life.

The main cause of depression in younger people, in my experience, is a perceived problem that is exageratted by an inability to be in control, i.e. relying on parents. This usually goes away in time with increased maturity as long as the person takes a more objective view and betters their relationship with their parents (if you notice, after adolescence how most people have a much better relationship with their family than during).

Of course, I don't know what your problem is, so I can't help you. But the best thing to do, even if you are just feeling down for no reason, is to write down exactly how you feel. Emotions are good, even if they are "bad," as long as they are released and validated, no matter how stupid they might seem. And writing things down helps you make physical connections between emotions, feelings and situations, and you can usually make a lot more sense about things than just doing it in your head. Anyway. Go out, get yourself a cup of coffee and a notepad, sit down in a quiet place and take a look at whats gettin you down.
 
SuperDuck_1 said:
no one to talk to
the pain over whelms
it trickles down
im alone
no one calling on the phone
my msn list is empty
the blood slides down my arm
im alone
im hurt
no ones there
no ringing of the phone
im alone
no ones there
i bleed tonight
i bleed alone
just me
and my crimson tears
i bleed alone
no one to hug me
no one to care
the pain is there
it consumes me
i bleed alone
im hurt
i bleed alone
i want a hug
i bleed alone
no ones there
so i bleed alone
why live
when im alone
so i bleed
bleed
bleed
alone
oh god alone
am i
I
me
I bleed
alone
just me
all
all
all
alone
and my crimson tears
dripping alone
no one to help
no one to fix this
no ones there
so
so
so i bleed alone
i want a hug
i want someone to talk too
no ones there
so
so
so i bleed alone
these crimson tears is all i have
is all that will comfort me
so hopefully these crimson tears are enough to take all the hurt and pain away
flow oh God flow
oH god flow my percious crimson tears
let them take the hurt
let them take the pain
let them take all the tourment away from my grey pain filled soul
Oh god let them take there course
God let them do there worst
for i was here
and hopefully soon
i will be gone
and nothing left to morn
but my crimson tears
the crimson tears i left behind
to show you wants mine
and now nothings
its all i left behind
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Sorry, but that 'poem' sucks :shrug: Particularly "my msn list is empty" doesn't exactly lend itself to great writing or tragedy. There's no feeling there at all, just the same couple thoughts repeated over and over, word for word. It doesn't sound like you're 'fucked the head' it sounds like you got bored and wanted some attention.

I wrote a lot of crazy stuff when I was really depressed years ago, but at least I always took the time to write well.
 
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