hey OLDSKUL. i revisited unsung, and i fixed the "pumping" i think, and put a little oomph in the bass guitar, and adjusted the drums a little.
http://talkingmeat.com/unsung.mp3
better?
Definitely an improvement. Everything in general sounds better, the whole mix sounds more "glued" together. The only thing I would change is to pull that kick drum back just....a little. I think EQ-wise you have everything just right - but that kick is just a *tad* overwhelming.
Oh, and at the very end - the toms are a little hot, and a little muddy. I would pull them back 2-5dB at around 220Hz.
Great job otherwise. Now I want to hear your originals.