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Originally Posted by CapnPyro
Just finished this tonight, let me know what you guys think. A few things look off, and there's a few things that are new to me that I've never drawn before.
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Maybe it's just me, but that first shot, it looks like the perspective may be off a bit. I'm not too sure what I'm looking at there.
I like the facial detail though.
And the last panel, I'm not real sure about the position. I think I'd like to see them as they come through the glass or whatever from the exact opposite angle, looking up at them.
Good work though. I've recently decided to jump back in, although my linework has suffered a good bit from lack of use, so I may concentrate on coloring. Nice bit of inspiration from the artwork posted so far.