New song for you guys to solo to!

Rockstar Psy
10-20-2007, 12:51 AM
The Precision - Within a Dream.mp3 (http://www.mediafire.com/?9zictwy8lui)
You can have fun with this, my bassist & I wrote it. We plan on getting someone to rap over it & maybe some R&B vocals. Hopefully I can sell this to some producer as it clearly would be a great rap song. Otherwise I thought it would be fun for you guitarists to solo with. Its in Dmin

blazindave
10-20-2007, 01:24 AM
FIRST.

What are the chords? What is the progression?

It's interesting. I'll be giving this a try.

AniMisM
10-20-2007, 02:45 PM
I'm gonna tear the shit outta this song.

Rockstar Psy
10-23-2007, 01:09 AM
Here are all the progressions:

Intro/verses D - Bb
Chorus1: D - Bb - F - C
Chorus2: D - Bb - F - A
Bridge1: Bb - D - C
(then verse before bridge2)
Bridge2 F - D, F - G, (repeats) then ending is same as verse.

It is really a very simple song but the melody is just perfect :P

also sorry if i labeled the parts wrong :x but if you listen to it & read along you'll get the idea

AniMisM
11-06-2007, 11:19 AM
Astral, would it be possible for you to give me the raw individual tracks so I can do my own mix?

Rockstar Psy
11-07-2007, 02:06 AM
Astral, would it be possible for you to give me the raw individual tracks so I can do my own mix?

damn man, no i have way too many tracks cause of my keys, its nothing crazy just record over it. its not like there is anyone else doing it anyways:baby:

AniMisM
11-07-2007, 01:17 PM
Ah well. I just wanted to brighten the mix a bit, it's kinda muddy and the bass is too high.
I really like the piano part, I'm a big fan of songs that use a common tone with arpeggios.

Rockstar Psy
11-07-2007, 01:54 PM
Ah well. I just wanted to brighten the mix a bit, it's kinda muddy and the bass is too high.
I really like the piano part, I'm a big fan of songs that use a common tone with arpeggios.

:gayfight: :boogie: :brows:

skully
11-14-2007, 05:20 AM
Getting to this thread kind of late, but that sounds pretty awesome. :D

Rockstar Psy
11-16-2007, 02:03 PM
thanks man, i plan on selling it to a producer for $$

BeLiaL
11-16-2007, 02:46 PM
have you sold stuff to producers in the past?

Minstrel
11-16-2007, 07:54 PM
I gave it a quick shot, happy with some of it, some of it sucks. At least one place I can think of just kinda sounds like I am wandering.

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Rockstar Psy
11-17-2007, 02:34 AM
sounds pretty awesome, cept wtf did you record it on ew

Minstrel
11-17-2007, 07:29 AM
Yeah, I fixed the guitar tone. I dunno, it sounded good when I recorded it, but when I went back and listened to it an hour ago, I was like wtf? That tone is shit. It sounds pretty kickass now. I love that you ca change inserts in cubase after the recording is done.

Here is the fixed version.

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Minstrel
11-26-2007, 11:31 AM
I need the cool kids to listen to this and critique me.

AniMisM
11-26-2007, 06:36 PM
Not bad Minstrel, you have a nice vibrato. Tone was good too, but I think the guitar mix was a bit hot (not that mixing matters in this case).

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