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Rap is (c)rap

Ghetto Youf
10-14-2007, 05:31 AM
Well, I hope not because I wrote some.

The Weed I Need (http://www.kawlinz.com/nkc/the-demo-tape/the-weed-i-need/), just grab the mp3 from the page.

I wrote the first and third verses and I also did the beat, my buddy did the middle verse and we both wrote the chorus.

Positive and negative criticisms are welcome.
assfrags
10-14-2007, 12:55 PM
I hope you're kidding me. This is pretty awful.
Tantric Rex
10-14-2007, 12:58 PM
What is it with the invasion of the shitty rappers here?
AniMisM
10-14-2007, 01:46 PM
omfg
Minstrel
10-14-2007, 05:38 PM
rap is not music guys.
travelyan
10-15-2007, 06:13 PM
Stay away from me with your morals// while I’m
High as fuck with a hot bitch givin’ me oral





sigh

the early 90s got rap right, this new shit is just... unnecessary
Velo
10-15-2007, 06:59 PM
it's hard to be too creative when you're talking about weed but the lyrics weren't that bad.

didn't necessarily like the beat
Ghetto Youf
10-15-2007, 07:03 PM
No one thinks that it's funny, at all? They're not meant to be groundbreaking lyrics or anything, just two guys goofing off.

Thanks for feedback anyways everyone.
assfrags
10-15-2007, 09:01 PM
Die in a hole. Production wasn't that bad there definitely needed more, just the lyrics are incredibly bad, even for a funny song, its just sticking to stupid cliches.
John the Jammer
10-15-2007, 09:19 PM
rap is useless rant
MinasTirithGuard
11-05-2007, 06:35 AM
I didn't care too much for the beat.

This is an awesome beat however:
YouTube - Deltron 3030 - Positive Contact (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-oCXwl7XBiQ)
Cool animation too, even if it's ripped off of Macross.
9er
11-06-2007, 06:25 PM
This is probably one of the worst things I've ever heard. The beat is annoying, the words aren't creative, and you guys have no flow. Kill yourself.
FishStix
11-06-2007, 11:26 PM
your friend has a way better flow / voice.


It sucks, BTW.
Steed13
11-13-2007, 07:43 PM
omg your a bunch of assholes....i agree it wasn't the best but atleast he took the time to try to write something....and rap is not fucking shitty it is fucking awsome!
assfrags
11-13-2007, 08:49 PM
omg your a bunch of assholes....i agree it wasn't the best but atleast he took the time to try to write something....and rap is not fucking shitty it is fucking awsome!

Shut the fuck up.
shitwizard
11-18-2007, 11:26 PM
your friend has a way better flow / voice.


It sucks, BTW.